Katie, Harry, Leah, Ria. Well done this is a good interpretation of Eliot's script. There are some lovely shots within this film for example the pan around Charlotte when she gets angry and also the low-angle when Charlotte and Isaac confront each other. There are some technical issues such as the sound quality, some shots are out of focus and the lighting is over exposed throughout large swaithes of the film. There are lots of good points as well such as your shot variety. This is a very strong merit production. Eliminate the technical issues and it could be a distinction next time.
Katie, Harry, Leah, Ria.
ReplyDeleteWell done this is a good interpretation of Eliot's script. There are some lovely shots within this film for example the pan around Charlotte when she gets angry and also the low-angle when Charlotte and Isaac confront each other. There are some technical issues such as the sound quality, some shots are out of focus and the lighting is over exposed throughout large swaithes of the film. There are lots of good points as well such as your shot variety. This is a very strong merit production. Eliminate the technical issues and it could be a distinction next time.